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 chose jeff,you must do....(I'M TIRE OF THIS!)

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Date d'inscription : 13/07/2007

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MessageSujet: chose jeff,you must do....(I'M TIRE OF THIS!)   chose jeff,you must do....(I'M TIRE OF THIS!) Icon_minitimeSam 14 Juil - 9:51

la je poste un poeme que j'ecrit comme sa, avec mes sentiments d'un trait... je veut un opinion non pas sur la facon et le style mais sur qui me tourner entre elles...je previent je suis plus alese avec l'anglais pour parler dileme...alors sa va comme suis



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-[center]jeff, chose wisely, this ape or me?
come on jeff, don't listen her,i'm your friend no?
this girl suck,am i your first friend or not
viper tongue girl talk like that to me
she say i MUST chose between her and one of my girlfriend(amie de fille)
she told me that, and with that i'm just, well not feeling great so..so

-jeff you know that i want your good...
i know with that snake you're never going to be in the mood.
she want to control your life,a bit more and its the remote she will got with you.
since you met her i barely reconize you...changed so much thats not you.
aren't we happy before that meeting with HER.
i will never be mad at you like she does tonight when you chose to be by me.
her gang will eat you, forgive me the word but,you will be not even a leftover.
i know that may hurt you,i know you may feel to me more than angry
but like our song say 'come clarity' may that unblind you.
the big heart is becoming heartstone. what you swore to never be.
your becoming her guard dog,never say me that she need you...
hey oh! she the beauty of the school, a bodyguard she can hire one...
you promise me not long ago to stay mine

-jeff, my best...forget the monkeys and come here.
she don't deserve you,hey your 'mister sweet heart.nice face'
every girl are at your feet since your by me....
don't you see? your popularity is cause of me.
i know you will chose me....and after tomorrow you will stand right there.
your good pass by me,you fist became mace
you improve yourself since our met,you changed right yes the best direction.
before you were what? a funfair atraction...

-you see how she talk to her FRIENDS...
you nothing more than her puppet...
you want to finish like %#&?#$& and being her slave...
i'm going to help jeff, its the time to be set,
she don't look inside, she looking for puppet like fashion thread
don't be so naive, your not her friend , comme on get out of being that naive.

-come on jeff, finish that right here and chose me like you want inside.
you know,i know,everybody know that i'm your choice...

-jeff...we are kindergarden friend
we got throught easy and rough time
don't trash that for "miss perfect'
hey remember,thats to me you told your first rime
we have been together like wife and husband,
better and worst as you say.your to good for that kind of world.

-ah stop to slack off and push her away...
jeff,she the one that remain in your way..
on the dark moon of destiny she the last light ray.
forget her,go upside...
just, you know make her step aside...

-jeff,you are doing so much bad...
i can feel it do you, you feel me? feeling how i'm sad...
i feel you...yeah i know you're torn apart
i know inside its a volcano,you feel so mad...not just mad but really sad.
its a bleeding inside that really hurt....
i 'll stop now...we me and that girl talked to you more than you needed to think.
i know that you will never be the one who will sink...
good bye jeff,have a rest on that.

-yeah,good night jeff...may destiny put you on the good path...
sweet dreams...


(are they kidding me? saying me good night... hey i'm feeling broken.
the anger within me has finaly awoken.
the pain in my hea ans soul worsten...
i have to chose, chose between friends...
chosing...pff that a joke can i have MY CHOICE in the answers....
no and thats not going to happen...
i'm tire of being in there crossfire.
tire of being a puppet in masters hand.
tire of having to hide me of there sight...
tire to be only love by my might.
they want me death or what?
i promise to never act so i will not do things.
but usualy that pain...inside i transfert into body one.
a bleeding pain,made to cut my life out.
guy tonight you are lucky....
VERY LUCKY,JASON HOLDING MY ARMS TIGHTLY.
KIM DISARMING MY HAND,AND WASHING THOUGHT OF ME.
ALEX HOLDING MY HEAD PREVENTIR LOST OF CONSISNESS.
i will say you that , just that to end this message.
'i hope you will never have to chose between friends, its to painfull to even imagine the carnage it done inside a head and heart.'
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Nombre de messages : 257
Age : 36
Côté coeur : ♥ Drek ♥
Pièce détestée : Pièce illusion
Pièce préférée : Pièce des amoureux
Date d'inscription : 11/07/2007

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MessageSujet: Re: chose jeff,you must do....(I'M TIRE OF THIS!)   chose jeff,you must do....(I'M TIRE OF THIS!) Icon_minitimeSam 14 Juil - 14:43

Je t'ai dis mon avis sur msn. C'est clair que c'est dur mais voila. Je ne pense pas t'avoir aidé mais au moins tu sais ce que je pense... :S
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Nombre de messages : 404
Age : 34
Côté coeur : lui♥
Pièce détestée : piece noire
Pièce préférée : piece d'eau
Date d'inscription : 14/07/2007

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MessageSujet: Re: chose jeff,you must do....(I'M TIRE OF THIS!)   chose jeff,you must do....(I'M TIRE OF THIS!) Icon_minitimeDim 15 Juil - 0:06

j'suis nuule en anglais!! alors j'peu pas t'aider desolé =S
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Nombre de messages : 257
Age : 36
Côté coeur : ♥ Drek ♥
Pièce détestée : Pièce illusion
Pièce préférée : Pièce des amoureux
Date d'inscription : 11/07/2007

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Il doit choisir entre deux de ses amies qui se détestent à mort... Il doit choisir une des deux :S
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Nombre de messages : 404
Age : 34
Côté coeur : lui♥
Pièce détestée : piece noire
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Date d'inscription : 14/07/2007

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MessageSujet: Re: chose jeff,you must do....(I'M TIRE OF THIS!)   chose jeff,you must do....(I'M TIRE OF THIS!) Icon_minitimeDim 15 Juil - 0:17

OO ba pourquoi choisir... si c'est des amies?
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Nombre de messages : 257
Age : 36
Côté coeur : ♥ Drek ♥
Pièce détestée : Pièce illusion
Pièce préférée : Pièce des amoureux
Date d'inscription : 11/07/2007

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Parce que elles se détestent et Jeff doit choisir un camp... Il a essayé de leur faire comprendre qu'il peut pas choisir entre deux amies [ Désolée Jeff si je parle pour toi ] mais elle veulent pas comprendre...
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Nombre de messages : 404
Age : 34
Côté coeur : lui♥
Pièce détestée : piece noire
Pièce préférée : piece d'eau
Date d'inscription : 14/07/2007

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outch... ben... pour bien leur faire comprendre tu pourrait peut etre dire que tu en choisis aucune et que tu fais un break, et que quand elles auront compris, ou quand elles se feront plus la geule ben elles pourront revenir te parler... mais bon voila apres moi je sais que c'est pas simple de dire sa a ses amis, et encore moins simple de le faire!! =S
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